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Section I: Using PaG to Add Life
The Art of Fragments
Dashes, Ellipses, & Other Pauses
Italics and All-Caps (Adding Emotion)
More New PaG
Section II: Words
Using Adverbs Successfully
Active Versus Passive
Section III: Punctuation (Dem Dry Bones)
Interlude: A Matter of Style
Interlude: The Roles of Punctuation
Combining Two Sentences (Grammatically)
Combining Two Sentences Ungrammatically
Interlude: The Pitch of Punctuation Marks
Adding Extra Information (Parentheses, the Double Comma, and the Double Dash)
Section IV: The Comma, Lowliest of Punctuations
Interlude: The Rules of Grammar?
Resolutions to the Great Comma Problem
Fitting PaG to the Scene's Mood
The Awesome Moment
Interlude: How Much is Too Much?
Interlude: Mimicking Thinking
Appendix 1: Rarer Effects
Appendix 2: Copy-Editing Issues
Appendix 3: How Do We Know Pitch?
Appendix 4: Wizards