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Section I: Using PaG to Add Life
The Art of Fragments
Dashes, Ellipses, & Other Pauses
Italics and All-Caps (Adding Emotion)
Repetition
Disfluencies
Exclamations
More New PaG

Section II: Words

Using Adverbs Successfully
Active Versus Passive
Conjunctions
That

Section III: Punctuation (Dem Dry Bones)
Sentence Length
Paragraphs
       Interlude: A Matter of Style
       Interlude: The Roles of Punctuation
Combining Two Sentences (Grammatically)
Combining Two Sentences Ungrammatically
More Combining
       Interlude: The Pitch of Punctuation Marks
Adding Extra Information (Parentheses, the Double Comma, and the Double Dash)
Lists

Section IV: The Comma, Lowliest of Punctuations
Split Personalit
       Interlude: The Rules of Grammar?
Comma Confusion
Resolutions to the Great Comma Problem

More Effects
Fitting PaG to the Scene's Mood
The Awesome Moment

Conclusion

MORE INTERLUDES:
       Interlude: How Much is Too Much?
       Interlude: Pitch
       Interlude: Mimicking Thinking

Appendix 1: Rarer Effects
Appendix 2: Copy-Editing Issues
Appendix 3: How Do We Know Pitch?
Appendix 4: Wizards

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