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No Isolation

Ah, the exception that proves the rule. They are approaching a fraternity to question them
Splosh! Lula got water ballooned. Direct hit. I immediately jumped aside.

"What the Sam Hill? Lula yelled. "Son of a peach basket." She looked at me. "What was that?"

"Water ballon, but it smells like it was filled with beer. I think it was a beer balloon"

Lula pulled her gun out of her purse, fired off a fast four rounds at the balcony, and everyone scattered. (Evonovich, Tricky Twenty-Two, page 84)

Firing her gun was an awesome moment, except for the lack of isolation. Both the water baloon and the fact that it contained beer also had potential.

Because they are not isolated, we get a sense of zaniness, not awesomeness.

And the zaniness comes from breaking the rule -- by not following the rules for Awesome Moments, these bizarre events are being treated as normal.

This is a remarkably consistent style for Evanovich.

Summary

Can the Awesome Moment be a Paragraph?

Artificial Brevity

What if it can't be Explained in Advance?

Awesomeness From the Character's Perspective

Can the Awesome Moment Be Missing?